tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4813456302690455886.post129095240128574741..comments2023-03-15T11:24:57.445+01:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU SHUUKAN: Haiku Shuukan #1 AgonyUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4813456302690455886.post-62224954855570737152014-04-19T21:21:45.308+02:002014-04-19T21:21:45.308+02:00You're right, this is a tricky one. At first ...You're right, this is a tricky one. At first I tried thinking about something that had caused me agony, but I couldn't find anything that had triggered such genuinely raw emotion. Instead, I found it helpful to think of an incident/event I know had been the cause of real agony in others. So:<br /><br />tsunami<br />this christmas<br />to the sea I throw a wreath <br /><br />This is one example, but I'm sure you can think of some that are more relevant to you. Good luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4813456302690455886.post-54500473506861372432014-04-19T17:26:35.668+02:002014-04-19T17:26:35.668+02:00Hi Kristjaan, the prompt "agony" is rea...Hi Kristjaan, the prompt "agony" is really tough to write a haiku on. I've made 2 tries as of now. Your valuable comments will make them better in later period surely. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4813456302690455886.post-79616855257437086942014-04-19T12:43:09.896+02:002014-04-19T12:43:09.896+02:00I look forward to another haiku journey Keistjaan....I look forward to another haiku journey Keistjaan.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09579935838085166414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4813456302690455886.post-35384250633881522582014-04-19T10:33:13.109+02:002014-04-19T10:33:13.109+02:00our silence
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